Last night, Coyote and I finished doing our hand-written edits (because we're old-school that way). I just got them all plugged into the Word doc and sent them back to the publisher.
Hopefully, Book II will release sometime in December.
To celebrate, I thought I'd share with you all an undeleted scene-- Coyote and I had written a lot more of Clayton and Alyssa's backstory for Book II and ended up cutting most of it. Here is a section we decided to put back in, as it becomes important later for Books V-VI.
Enjoy, and Happy Halloween, everybody!
New excerpt from Carcosa
The man was dressed sensibly for hiking:
sturdy boots, layered clothing, a rain jacket. Black-haired, slim, and lithe,
he moved with great purpose, his strides long and quick. Overhead, the autumn
sky was pale gray. A sudden, sharp wind gusted some pebbles across the trail in
front of him and he paused, frowning.
After a moment, he resumed. All around him,
the grass and trees were almost fiercely vibrant against the leaden sky. The
dampness of the air enhanced the pine scent of the forest, and along the trail,
clumps of yellow and purple wildflowers remained. But the man was not here to
take in the scenery. He quickened his pace, moving at a jog until he reached a
valley. A stream had appeared to his left, snaking down at out of the
mountains, running parallel to the path. The stream grew wide in the lower country,
its banks lush and dark. Up ahead, he spotted a cluster of water birches. Their
leaves had just started to turn gold, dappling the surface of the water.
The girl was sitting on the riverbank, her back
to the trail. Nearby, her horse was nibbling at a patch of short grass. As the
man drew near, he saw that she held a gold leaf by its stem, twirling it.
Without turning around, she asked, “You don’t ride?”
“Not today.” He sat down on the ground beside
her, legs crossed, palms resting on his knees.
She did not turn her head, but he could sense
her regarding him, all the same. She tossed the leaf away. “You’re wasting your
time.”
“We’ll see.” Taking a pack of cigarettes out
of his breast pocket, he shook one out and offered it to her. She made no move to
take it. “Go on. I know you smoke.”
“Not my brand.”
He took one for himself and lit up. “You know
why I’m here-- to offer you a place in Starry Wisdom.” With a small flourish, a
business card appeared in his hand. He passed it to her.
She examined it. “Uh-huh.”
“An apprenticeship.”
“Not interested.”
“You don’t belong with them.”
“You don’t know me.”
“I know there’s never been anyone like you
before.”
She said nothing.
When he spoke again, his voice was low and
emphatic. “You’ve never been given a choice. You don’t have to stay with the
Order just because you were born into it. You’re a rare, precious thing, and
all they’ve ever done is limit you. How long can you go on like this? You’re so
strong. A fighter. You don’t wait for opportunities, you make them. In that, you’re like us. You have to see that.”
“I don’t want to talk to you. Go away.”
“I don’t think you really mean that. If you
did, you wouldn’t be here.”
For the first time, she glanced at him. Blushing,
she looked quickly away again.
He grinned, perfectly aware of how handsome
he was. Just as she would be aware, whether anyone had ever told her or not, of
the traditional relationship in Starry Wisdom between master and pupil. For a
moment, he fingered the filter of his cigarette, letting his gaze roam over her
form. She shrank from him further, huddled up in her jacket, which concealed
from him her body but not that face, that hair and skin. Still grinning, he
brought the filter to his lips and inhaled luxuriantly. “The Order talks a big
game. Their traditions, their big ideals, Ma’at. But has that been your
experience? Would you say they’ve treated you justly and compassionately? Of
course not. They have no respect for you or your talents, except for how it
benefits them.”
She wrapped her arms around her knees.
“That’s not true.”
“Isn’t it?”
“Not all of them.”
“Oh, think you’ve found a good one? It can
happen, I suppose. Still, they’ll never give you what I can give you-- freedom.”
“You’re asking me to turn traitor.”
“I’m asking you to be true to yourself. I’ve
never been inside the Oracles’ sanitarium, but I’ve read reports on the conditions
of the place. It’s disgusting. We’ve never treated Oracles that way. We’ve
always recognized their value. If you stay with the Order, all they will do is
use you, just as they’ve always used you. You will live and die as their
servant.”
“But that’s not how it would be in Starry
Wisdom.”
“With us, you would never be a servant. You
would gain power for yourself, to use however you choose.”
Hugging herself even tighter, she rested her
chin on her knees. “What if I say no?”
He shrugged. “Then you say no.”
“That’s it?”
“That’s it.”
“You’re not gonna break out the chloroform
and the tranquilizer darts? Bag me, tag me, drag me off?”
“No, but I can’t speak for the rest of my
colleagues.”
“So, you’re, like, above it?”
“Just pragmatic. I’d much rather win you
over, and I don’t think bagging you and tagging you is the way to go about it. But
if someone else tries it, I have every confidence that they won’t succeed. I
have faith in you. Can you
honestly say the same about anyone here—your classmates? Your teachers? Your
parents?”
“I have a new family.”
“The director? Or that professor of yours--
what’s his name? The Slav?” Her face darkened. The man pretended to search his
memory. “Oh, yes-- Arcady Petrovic. He’s what, thirty? Having an affair with a
fifteen-year-old student.”
“You don’t know what you’re talking about.”
“What’s not to know? Here you are, a
beautiful, vulnerable young girl. And here he is, an older man, an authority
figure—”
“It’s not like that!”
“Of course it isn’t. Perhaps we should
discuss your foster father instead.”
“I see what you’re doing. It’s not working.”
“What am I doing?”
“Trying to discredit them-- but you can’t.
You don’t know them like I do.”
“If I had something on either of them, believe
me, now would be the time to bring it up.”
“But you don’t.”
“I’m sure they both mean well. One gets to
enjoy seeing you in his bed, and then the director, who, besides filling a void
in his personal life, has found himself one hell of a commodity. I’m sure you’re
aware that since he took you out of the Dormitory, his security detail has
increased. Security’s increased around here as well—arranging this conversation
was certainly a challenge. Now, don’t get me wrong, I’m sure his motivations
were purely philanthropic. But once you were out… well, Director Grabowski is
an intelligent man, and a tactician. He knows what he’s got. And so do I.”
She shook her head vehemently. “That’s not
true. It isn’t.”
“I think we both know that it is.”
“Clayton adopted
me.”
“Yes, he did. And now you feel indebted to
him. So when he asks you to do something, as he eventually will, you won’t
hesitate. Oh, I know what you’re going to say, and you’re right-- I’m sure he
would never deliberately put you in harm’s way. But there will always be the greater
good. That is a priority that will always take precedence for him—even over
you.”
“And I’m sure your intentions are nothing but
pure.”
“No, my intentions are quite selfish. At
least I’m up front about it.”
“You’re saying Clayton isn’t honest?”
“I think there are points where Clayton isn’t
honest with himself—”
“Director Grabowski, please,” she corrected.
“I can call him Clayton. Not you.”
That caught the man off-guard. For a moment,
he gaped at her. Then he threw back his head and laughed. “You sound like one of us.”
“I already told you, I’m not interested.”
“Fair enough. And when you’ve finish training
here, what then?”
“That’s none of your business.”
“I just hope the choice remains yours.”
She did not reply.
“They’ll want you to be an assassin, of
course. They won’t call it that. ‘Field work’ is a good catch-all phrase but
make no mistake. Your training here will help you be as versatile in as many
environments as possible-- stealth, infiltration, tactics, combat magic...” He
paused. “What about the Terminus?”
She stiffened. “What about it?”
“The Order has never found a way to evade
it.”
For the first time, she turned to face him
completely. “And Starry Wisdom has?”
“The Order wouldn’t think it was important, but
we would. And we have resources the Order does not.”
“So you haven’t found a way either.”
“There’s never been a case like yours before.
A fully cognizant Oracle—”
“Blah, blah, blah,” she rested her chin on her
knees again. “I’ve heard it all before.”
“No, you haven’t. I’m telling you, it’s
possible. You’re an Oracle and a mage.
You could undergo the rite.”
She sneered. “Who wants to live forever? Not
me.”
“Is that how you really feel, or is that
resignation I’m hearing?”
“Death is inevitable. You have a death in
your future. Would you like to hear it? The date? The means?”
He waved his hand, still holding the
cigarette. “Irrelevant. The future isn’t certain—not mine, not yours. And it’s
one thing to say you don’t fear death now, at fifteen. It’s another to hear
that tick-tock approaching. You say you don’t want to live forever, but you’ll
be dead forever, and forever is a very long time.”
“I have your card.”
“You do.” He stood to go. Lightly, he touched
her shoulder. “In all the world’s history, perhaps in any world’s history,
there has never been anyone like you, Alyssa Calderon. Just remember, the Order
views you in terms of how you benefit them. I view you in terms of how you
could benefit yourself.”
She stared off into the distance, his card held
loosely in her fingers. She did not turn to watch him leave, but his voice
floated back to her, easy and unconcerned. “Don’t worry. Everyone says no at first.”
* * *
Afterwards, the only person she told about the
man’s offer was Arcady. Arcady held her while she talked. He lent her his lighter
so she could burn the business card.
Not that it mattered. Just knowing the man’s
name, Kang Han, was sufficient. If she wanted to reach him, she could. And he
would come. All the same, she watched the flames eat through the expensive stock,
the embossed ink.
She was just starting to feel calm again when
Arcady said she should tell Clayton.
They argued. It took a lot to convince Arcady
not to pick up the phone and call the director’s office right then and there. Clayton
had warned her about watching out for Starry Wisdom. He’d had security beefed
up around the Academy—Kang had been right about that. (As he’d been right about
so many things.) But if Clayton found out about this—at best, he’d pull
her out of school. At worst, he might take it as a shot fired. As regional director,
he had both the authority and the resources to start a war.
A war. Over her.
She wasn’t about to let that happen.