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When
Dawn had arrived to pick up her mother that afternoon, she’d found her waiting
on the porch, impeccably dressed, as always: pantsuit, lipstick, hair
curled. Her mother sat on the porch
swing, her purse in her lap, like a woman waiting for the bus. Her only concession to old age was the
slip-on elastic shoes she wore. Ten
years ago, she wouldn’t have been caught dead in such unattractive footwear,
not even to throw out the trash. Now
they were necessary because the blood pressure medication caused her feet to
swell.
She
held carefully to Dawn’s arm as they descended the porch stairs together. When Dawn helped her into the car, her
arthritic fingers sought vainly for the seatbelt. The buckle had slipped down between the seat
and the door. Wordlessly, Dawn retrieved
it for her.
When
they got to the grocery store, Dawn pushed the cart. It was a newer store, a cavern of florescence. Aisle upon aisle presented itself in a
succession of gleaming linoleum floors, bright cairns of vegetables and fruit,
and humming freezer cases. The walkways
bustled with shoppers. At first, her mother
walked slowly beside her. She opened her
pocket book and her hands shook so much the coupons fell out. A stock boy helped Dawn gather them up.
Gradually,
her mother shrank closer and closer to Dawn’s side. She kept asking things like, “Shouldn’t the
cereal be over here?” and “Don’t forget tomato paste. I need tomato paste.” Her voice rose with a sort of panicky
insistence.
It
was in the meat section that she started to cry, her mascara running.
“Oh,
Mom,” Dawn said, patting her arm with equal helplessness.
“I
don’t like this store,” her mother said.
“I want to go to Thriftway.”
Her
daughter said, “They closed the Thriftway last year, remember?” She did not add, And you don’t need tomato paste.
You haven’t made your spaghetti sauce since Dad died.
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Wow, this almost made me cry.
ReplyDeleteThank you for reading. I'm glad you found it moving.
DeleteLoved it. I wanted to get her some tomato paste anyway.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Murielle! Yes, I imagine they ended up buying some anyway.
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